You Worked With a Copywriter On Your Website & Weren't Happy With The Results But Did They Actually Do This?

If you've worked with a copywriter before but your enquiries didn't change and your website just had nicer words on it than before, it's worth understanding exactly what probably happened.

There's a specific kind of work that not every website copywriter does that has very little to do with how well something is written and everything to do with what the website copy is actually saying in relation to your competition.

If that work didn't happen, the website copy could be beautifully written and still not change anything about your enquiries because the thing that needed to change wasn't just the writing.

It was the positioning ie how your website copy means you’re perceived by potential clients in relation to your competitors.

What "Better Writing" Actually Changes And What It Doesn't

When a copywriter rewrites your existing website copy to sound better, WHAT you're saying doesn't always change, only HOW you're saying it.

If your original website copy described your services in broad, generic terms without differentiating you from your competitors, the positioning underneath the new copy is identical. It's just better dressed.

A potential client comparing your newly polished website copy to your competitors' websites is still asking the same question she was asking before: why you and not them?

The improved writing still doesn't answer it.

This is why "better writing" alone so often produces no change in enquiries.

The thing that determines whether a potential client chooses you isn't how nicely your copy is written.

It's whether your website copy gives her a specific, compelling reason to choose you over the alternatives she's comparing you to.

That reason comes from positioning and in many cases, repositioning you to stand apart from your competitors.

What Repositioning Actually Involves

Repositioning doesn't start with your existing website copy and asking "how can this be improved?"

It starts with your business: your approach, your clients, your results, the specific way you work and your differentiators and asks a different question entirely.

What makes your work genuinely different from a competitor offering something similar?

This is excavation work. It involves understanding not just what services you offer but how you deliver them differently.

Not just who your clients are but what specific situation your particular expertise is most suited to.

Not just the results you get but what makes those results different from standard outcomes or the standard approach.

It involves looking at your competitors, not to copy what they're doing but to understand the landscape your ideal client is comparing you against, so your positioning can speak to what's missing from that landscape rather than blending into it.

The output of this work isn't better-written versions of your existing messaging.

It's different messaging entirely, built around what was found in the excavation and structured to make that the focus of every page.

This is what I mean when I say I won't rewrite your existing copy to sound better. I'll dig into what makes you different and make that the centre of your website.

Why "Similar Offers" Doesn't Mean "Same Positioning"

One of the most common things I hear from practitioners at the start of a project is some version of "I offer pretty similar treatments to my competitors so I'm not sure how different the messaging can really be."

You can offer the same treatment and deliver genuinely different experiences and outcomes.

The way it's delivered, the specific results it produces for specific clients and the particular approach or understanding the practitioner brings to it are not always the same, even when the service on the page looks identical.

"Deep tissue massage" describes a category. It doesn't describe the specific approach, the specific client focus or the specific outcomes that make one practitioner's deep tissue massage a genuinely different experience from another's.

Why AI Doesn't Do This Work

AI tools can write website copy. Ask ChatGPT or Claude to write a homepage for a wellness practitioner and it will produce something that feels good enough.

What AI cannot do is the excavation work that repositioning requires.

AI doesn't know what makes you specifically different from your competitors because it doesn't have access to that information unless you provide it. Most practitioners,haven't yet identified their true USP, which is why it’s not already in your website copy and your positioning.

What AI produces when asked to write wellness website copy is the most common way that wellness practitioners describe themselves rather than digging into what sets you apart. It creates website copy that is generic and safe and ultimately positions you exactly the same as the competitors it’s drawing on to write your website copy.

Not All Website Copywriters Do This Either

Strategic repositioning isn't a standard part of every copywriting service.

Many copywriters specialise in producing well-written copy from a brief. The client provides the information and the copywriter turns that into polished, professional and well-structured copy.

But it's a different skill to the one that identifies what should be in the brief in the first place.

To recognising that the brief itself and the practitioner's own sense of what's important about their business might be missing the actual differentiators.

To doing the strategic work of figuring out what the positioning needs to be before any website copy gets written at all.

If you've worked with a copywriter before and the brief they worked from was essentially your own existing sense of your business, what you got back was built on the same foundation as what you had before. It may be better written but with the same positioning and most likely the same result.

Why This Work Costs What It Costs

Strategic positioning work is more involved and more valuable than producing well-written website copy from a brief and the investment reflects that.

It requires the excavation process and competitive research so your positioning can be built strategically.

It requires building an entire messaging framework around what's found, not just writing new website copy but restructuring how your whole website communicates so the positioning runs consistently through every page.

This is an investment in your positioning, not just in the words on your website.

And positioning can change how your marketing works overall.

That's a different kind of return than "the website reads better than it did before."

The Difference Between Having a Website and Having This

There's a meaningful difference between having a website and having a website with copy that positions you as a premium expert who stands apart from the competition.

One of them gives a potential client nothing specific to differentiate you. And one of them gives her a clear, compelling, specific reason to choose you, even when what you offer looks similar to what she's seen elsewhere.

That's the work I do. Not rewriting what you already have to sound better but digging into what makes you genuinely different.

Check out my website copy packages here.

Sally Aquire is a website and blog copywriter for wellness, beauty and skin professionals. She does the strategic positioning work that AI and many copywriters don't by digging into what makes you genuinely different and making it the foundation of your website copy.

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